DEAR READERS! I have written some poetry! Now be brutal! I want your honost opinion's.
Soul
The window of my soul has cracks.
Shards fall out and cut my life.
Pieces breaking down to dust.
Crushed
So what do you think of it! Isnt is so EMO! I LOVE IT DO YOU NOT! :D So let me know what you think! I also have another one!
Teenage love angst
Blood is pounding in my head
The confusion seeping into my life,
As I lie in my bed
The music I hear dies.
Everything is falling apart and I can’t even see
What is it that I have done, to deserve what happening to me?!?
Dosn't it totally portray the teenange angst! Now note i dont feel the emotions in the poems. I just wrote them. :D
The manythings goign on in Kat's head
About Me
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- Kat
- Hi I'm Kaitlin! I love to read and I have been known to finish books over night. Life without reading would e so deppressing. I believe books are wonderful ways to escape reality for even just a few hours. :)
6 comments:
Kate, that's really good! I like both of them alot! Nice job.
YAY! I can make it through life as an Emo poet! HA HA!
How EMO. Lars will want to marry you.
Who is Lars?
Go on youtube and look up Lars the Emo Kid (make sure you watch the first one, not parts 2 or 3)
that was the most disturbing thing i have ever seen. What the heck!
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